@flipflopgames I looked over the improved page and and it looks great and it reads much better but would like to make just two more small suggestions.
Where it reads, "Are you a clild dreaming of making your first App and you need help then you are at the right place!" add in "or Game" so it will now read, "Are you a clild dreaming of making your first App or Game and you need help then you are at the right place!"
Last suggestion, where it reads, "Dreaming Bigger is a program where children send in their ideas for an App or Game that they want see become reality and I will help make it happen by working on the App or Game with them!" need to add "to" after "want" and add "a" after "become" so it will now read, "Dreaming Bigger is a program where children send in their ideas for an App or Game that they want to see become a reality and I will help make it happen by working on the App or Game with them!
Those are the only suggestions I have and everything else looks GREAT! Keep up the great work!!!
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Where it reads, "Are you a clild dreaming of making your first App and you need help then you are at the right place!" add in "or Game" so it will now read, "Are you a clild dreaming of making your first App or Game and you need help then you are at the right place!"
Last suggestion, where it reads, "Dreaming Bigger is a program where children send in their ideas for an App or Game that they want see become reality and I will help make it happen by working on the App or Game with them!" need to add "to" after "want" and add "a" after "become" so it will now read, "Dreaming Bigger is a program where children send in their ideas for an App or Game that they want to see become a reality and I will help make it happen by working on the App or Game with them!
Those are the only suggestions I have and everything else looks GREAT! Keep up the great work!!!
@jonpapiomitis
Excuse me, Irish spelling... Mix up..