**FlipFlopGames Announcement** Dreaming Bigger
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FlipFlopGames is happy to announce Dreaming Bigger for kids ages 9 through 11! Check out the full info at http://www.flipflopgames.org/dreaming-bigger.html
I hope that you tell your kids about it and if you are a kid then sign up!
Thanks Conner
P.S Tell me what you think
I hope that you tell your kids about it and if you are a kid then sign up!
Thanks Conner
P.S Tell me what you think
Comments
Was checking it out and I think it's a great idea. Just want to suggest a few corrections that should be done to the actual page.
Where it says, "Dreaming Bigger is for kids ages 9 through 11 That have a big idea for an App or Game." The "T" in that should be LOWER CASE!
Where it says, "Are you dreaming a kid dreaming of making your first app and you need help then you are at the right place!" The first "dreaming" needs to be removed, need to capitalize the "A" in app, and lastly need to add "or Game" so then it would now say, "Are you a kid dreaming of making your first App or Game and you need help then you are at the right place!"
Where it says, "And after you are done I can even publish your app!" It should say something along the lines of, "And after your App or Game is complete, I can even publish it!
Where it says, "Dreaming Bigger is a program where kids send in their ideas for things they want to see become a big hit and I will help them work on the project that they want to develop!" Replace "for things" to "for an App or Game that", replace "big hit" with "reality" and lastly replace "them work on the project that they want to develop!" to "make it happen by working on the App or Game!"
Where it says, "All you have to do is sigh up on the form below!" You have "sigh" rather than "sign". Need to replace the "H" with an "N".
My last suggestion is that in the selection box where you have the choice to select if you want to do a Game or App, you should remove the option to select "other" since you are not offering other things through Dreaming Bigger, only to do Apps or Games.
These are my suggestions and hope you take them into consideration to make it that much better and more professional. The idea is great and I like it. The website just needs some cleaning up a bit and it will be GREAT!
@FlipFlop Looks really cool, nice to see someone so young working to help others! You have a good future!
Perhaps if you live in a glass house, you shouldn't throw stones?
Actually.. the first meaning for "kid" in a dictionary is a baby goat... The primary usage of "Kid" is a baby goat, but the colloquial usage is "A child"
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lol.... Me loves a bit of grammer
yeah... Thats what I thought, and apparently he has a pro licensce now as well.. What he's doing is good though... But if he's publishing under his name it doesn't comply under the GS TOS
"grammatically"
For someone who loves "grammar" you sure misspell a lot.
Anyways, Conner I think this a great idea and it is great you are doing this out of the goodness of your heart. As for grammar you should get your parents or older sibling to read your website over before you publish anything or you can listen to LeonardDeveloper
youngster9
Interesting fact, my dad works for OUP (Oxford University Press).
kid 1 |kid|
noun
1 informal a child or young person.
• used as an informal form of address: get going, kid!
2 a young goat.
• leather made from a young goat's skin: [ as modifier ] : white kid gloves.
Looks much better with "Children"
Oxford dictionary definition:
kid/kid/
•Noun:
Young goat
•Noun:
Common Colloqui "Child or Young person"
I would like to ask where you are getting that from? Both my copy of the dictionary and the online oxford english dictionary state otherwise.
Also please don't try and patronise me. Anyway don't bother replying to this, let us keep this on topic (though the topic has probably run it's course). If you want to discuss grammar elsewhere email me :L
Your wrong
Also the people that no the definitions work no where near the OUP They work in the english department... The world department for Linguists... Not the press...
http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=kid
http://gamesalad.com/terms
section: 2. Requirements for Use of the Site and Services
that doesn't mean you can't make games with GS and learn …
GS contacted me and my mom and dad. They told us how they could help us with any thing. also they ask us to sign paper
Congrats anyway flipflop!
-Thomas
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