Hello there , I took 2 months break from GS and decided to get back to developing , here is some more gameplay video , hopefully I'll stick to the project now and keep moving forward , still making world 2 . I hope you like it
@Icebox I think you are getting very close to something great here and hope you stick with it. This is a style of platformer that has seen some success on the app store. One suggestion. I really like the art style but think the level art is just a tad to dreary (maybe just the background) consider this screen shot to the Sword of Zolan, a similar style game.
It has a similar look to yours, with a faded and basic background, but a tad more color and liveliness that is a bit more enjoyable. Just my opinion, but I think it would really change how your game looks. I like your ground tiles, but even think if you slightly upped the green in them it could look a little better.
Keep up the good work!
@RossmanBrothersGames thanks for your feedback , your right i didnt notice up until i saw the picture of the game , i need to add more details and work on the design more it will take time but ill try my best .. thanks again and i wish you the best with your game
@Icebox said: @RossmanBrothersGames thanks for your feedback , your right i didnt notice up until i saw the picture of the game , i need to add more details and work on the design more it will take time but ill try my best .. thanks again and i wish you the best with your game
A lot of the details and design in your game are great! More details will come over time as you think "I should add this" But I think an instant and less time taking improvement could be taking the level artwork you already have (which looks good) and doing a simple "replace color" with some slightly more vibrant colors (not too vibrant, as I think that wouldn't look good also)
Love it. Great work. Sounds are superb. The best way I can describe great sounds to actions is "Rewarding". You reward players with pleasurable sounds to their actions.
We want to hear the sounds. It's actually pleasurable.
If I could humbly make a comment.
Let's first look at the screen shot Sword of Zolan.
We have three enemies. Three traps. Two barrels. Block, jar. 6 grass elements. All on player's level. (Ignore the background).
It's rich but not overwhelming. Very dynamic but balanced.
So now let's watch your game video. Maybe two enemies but mostly one at a time. One mushroom. Sometimes just the player. There are moments when things get interesting. More going on. Multiple elements on screen at same time.
@Toque Thanks alot for your feedback , I need to get multiple elements on screen as you mentioned , ill work on that. Your right , after comparing i can see that my game lacks alot of element its not as interesting as sword of zolan. Thanks !
@Toque Thanks alot for your feedback , I need to get multiple elements on screen as you mentioned , ill work on that. Your right , after comparing i can see that my game lacks alot of element its not as interesting as sword of
Thanks for the support guys , i changed the colors of the ground tiles,added some background/more details to the level and made a death animation , it looks better now , I still need to add more enemies , but im too lazy to animate . Here is the updated version , feedback is great so far and I appreciate it, I think I can improve more so thanks alot
@Toque I don't really have a story , i just created a list of things i want to make , create a Hero , NPC's, Dialoug Box with typing effect , 10-20 enemies , terrains , 4 backgrounds , create a mechanic (turning monster to a box) , 3 save slots and thats it .. I will come up with a story once i finish these pieces ,im still changing things here and there , so thats why i keep asking for feedback... I don't think im doing it the right way , but I just want to work on something , cause if i sit down and think of a story ill take ages , so i keep thinking of stuff while i develop
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the game looks goods
Thanks for your feedback appreciate it , here is another update First Boss and intro to world 2. I will change the dialogue later on
Good stuff as always.
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I love the sounds you picked.
Cartoony running and retro dialogue box sounds and jump
Very nice
Nice to see your progress buddy
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Thanks guys for your continuous support and feedback !
It looks amazing great job keep it up
Nice job so far!
Hopefully the knowledge from your previous one will make this one easier.
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@apptrap22 Thanks alot !
@Two.E Yes everything is much easier now but still learning everyday from the forums
thanks for your feedback, appreciate it !
Looking good! It reminds me a bit of Goblin Sword which I've been enjoying this past week.
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@tatiang I love these 2d games I will play it maybe take some ideas here and there, thanks !
Hello there , I took 2 months break from GS and decided to get back to developing , here is some more gameplay video , hopefully I'll stick to the project now and keep moving forward , still making world 2 . I hope you like it
@Icebox I think you are getting very close to something great here and hope you stick with it. This is a style of platformer that has seen some success on the app store. One suggestion. I really like the art style but think the level art is just a tad to dreary (maybe just the background) consider this screen shot to the Sword of Zolan, a similar style game.
It has a similar look to yours, with a faded and basic background, but a tad more color and liveliness that is a bit more enjoyable. Just my opinion, but I think it would really change how your game looks. I like your ground tiles, but even think if you slightly upped the green in them it could look a little better.
Keep up the good work!
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@RossmanBrothersGames thanks for your feedback , your right i didnt notice up until i saw the picture of the game , i need to add more details and work on the design more
it will take time but ill try my best .. thanks again 
and i wish you the best with your game
A lot of the details and design in your game are great! More details will come over time as you think "I should add this" But I think an instant and less time taking improvement could be taking the level artwork you already have (which looks good) and doing a simple "replace color" with some slightly more vibrant colors (not too vibrant, as I think that wouldn't look good also)
www.rossmanbrosgames.com
Love it. Great work. Sounds are superb. The best way I can describe great sounds to actions is "Rewarding". You reward players with pleasurable sounds to their actions.
We want to hear the sounds. It's actually pleasurable.
If I could humbly make a comment.
Let's first look at the screen shot Sword of Zolan.
We have three enemies. Three traps. Two barrels. Block, jar. 6 grass elements. All on player's level. (Ignore the background).
It's rich but not overwhelming. Very dynamic but balanced.
So now let's watch your game video. Maybe two enemies but mostly one at a time. One mushroom. Sometimes just the player. There are moments when things get interesting. More going on. Multiple elements on screen at same time.
Maybe add more elements at times?
Great game so far!
Looks good
keep up the work
@RossmanBrothersGames I will change the colors to see the new results , thanks !
@Toque Thanks alot for your feedback , I need to get multiple elements on screen as you mentioned , ill work on that. Your right , after comparing i can see that my game lacks alot of element its not as interesting as sword of zolan. Thanks !
@jay2dx Thanks !
Awesome.Good work
Your game is amazing but not finished!!
Great stuff there. What's done is well done.
Thanks for the support guys , i changed the colors of the ground tiles,added some background/more details to the level and made a death animation , it looks better now , I still need to add more enemies , but im too lazy to animate
. Here is the updated version , feedback is great so far and I appreciate it, I think I can improve more so thanks alot 
Great improvement!
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Looking good. Great.
I like how you handled the secret areas, nicely done.
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Thanks guys im glad you like it !
looks great! keep up the good work
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It's amazing!! I like this style!!
Really great stuff you got going on
Icebox. Watching the videos. They are pieces. Can you tell me a little about the character? What's the story of the game?
Thanks.
Thanks everyone
@Toque I don't really have a story , i just created a list of things i want to make , create a Hero , NPC's, Dialoug Box with typing effect , 10-20 enemies , terrains , 4 backgrounds , create a mechanic (turning monster to a box) , 3 save slots and thats it .. I will come up with a story once i finish these pieces ,im still changing things here and there , so thats why i keep asking for feedback... I don't think im doing it the right way , but I just want to work on something , cause if i sit down and think of a story ill take ages , so i keep thinking of stuff while i develop