I don't like the mix of colors for the letters, but maybe that fits your game theme?
I know adding a stroke to text has become a more common thing, but it's still not good from a design school of thought. Some arguments can be made for it in certain situations, but I don't see it helping in this one.
The color of the sky and water are too similar, making the island appear to float in air rather than water.
Will there be more options to list? If not, try lowering these 3 items to the center of the screen.
Hello Adrenaline you´re right in what you say , tell me where i can learn to do a better designs, i test all the colors in illustrator for the sky and the water and no one looks good for them.
Good design can look easy, but it's a lot of work. Some of us went to school to specifically study design (like myself), while others use a sharp eye and teach themselves. There's rarely a simple "right" way to do things. That's why it's an art!
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Some constructive feedback:
Hope that helps!
Hello Adrenaline you´re right in what you say , tell me where i can learn to do a better designs, i test all the colors in illustrator for the sky and the water and no one looks good for them.
how will you do a good design for that? scene
Good design can look easy, but it's a lot of work. Some of us went to school to specifically study design (like myself), while others use a sharp eye and teach themselves. There's rarely a simple "right" way to do things. That's why it's an art!
I upload later other design thanks
What do you think of this one?
do you know some book in itunes where i can learn to design?
That's going in the right direction.
You won't learn design right from a book, but…a requirement in a lot of my classes was:
http://www.amazon.com/Meggs-History-Graphic-Design-Philip/dp/0470168730