New Screenshots of my game! Please look and comment!!

expired_012expired_012 Member Posts: 1,802
edited November -1 in Announce Your Game!
Hi guys, I took all of your recommendations for my game and fixed it up a bit. These two screenshots are of my Main Menu and Level 1, I fixed it like people asked. Please let me know what else I can improve on. Thanks! Comment!!

Main Menu:

http://s893.photobucket.com/albums/ac134/artonskyblue_2010/?action=view&current=Scene1.png

Level 1:

http://s893.photobucket.com/albums/ac134/artonskyblue_2010/?action=view&current=Scene2.png

Let me know what you think

Comments

  • iPhoneDevForMeiPhoneDevForMe Member Posts: 362
    Major improvement on the menu! What exactly is the gameplay if I may ask?
  • expired_012expired_012 Member Posts: 1,802
    The game works like this: you're a chicken and your objective is to save the baby chicks. There are other farm animals such as cows, llamas, sheeps, dogs, etc that are blocking your way to get those chicks by jumping, rotating, move left to right, etc.
  • expired_012expired_012 Member Posts: 1,802
    Anyone have any comments or
    recommendations?
  • KamazarKamazar Member Posts: 287
    Yep, big improvement on the menu. Fits the game quite nicely.
  • expired_012expired_012 Member Posts: 1,802
    Thanks, I really appreciate that you think it's better than before, and thanks for the advice, you really helped me a ton.
  • iggyjojoiggyjojo Member Posts: 14
    Looks great. Maybe put a little touches of detail and shadowing in the landscapes and buildings? Look at the Mario World 2d games and you'll know what I mean. So when are we going to get to try this sucker out?
  • expired_012expired_012 Member Posts: 1,802
    My goal is to get it by May 18, I wish I could get it sooner but I'm really busy with school these days so I'm unable to spend a lot of my time on the game. I'll make sure to leave promo codes though!! :)
  • nulonulo Member Posts: 315
    gigantic improvement on the menu screen. text with fire effect never look good. EVER.
  • ChaserChaser Member Posts: 1,453
    Much better!!!!!
  • debugdesigndebugdesign Member Posts: 886
    Looks good but if you want me to be picky, the bunny, cockerel, and chick don't have black outlines like the other characters and look like they have been done by a different artist.

    But other than that, looking good... Good luck!
  • expired_012expired_012 Member Posts: 1,802
    Thanks guys, you all really just made my day. It feels great for others to appreciate what you've done. This is only my first game so obviously all of you are way more experienced then me lol so it feels great coming from you guys especially. I'll make sure to give anyone a promo code if my game makes it to the app store :)
  • expired_012expired_012 Member Posts: 1,802
    Would anyone tell me how well their game sold? Does sometimes no one even buy an app? If ur app is not in the top 100 or featured does it still sell usually? Aroung how much does the avg. Game make?
  • expired_012expired_012 Member Posts: 1,802
    Anyone interested in promo codes when the game comes out? Let me know so I can message it to ur gamesalad profile :)
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