Ninja Training

tahakitan

here are some screenshots to my newest game coming out November. It is a runner game

https://docs.google.com/file/d/0BwAnA2KvhduSN0kxUm0xWVpTRTg/edit?usp=sharing
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0BwAnA2KvhduSb3dKQzhVMEhvMEk/edit?usp=sharing
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0BwAnA2KvhduSUXJTdWsxaEhDSms/edit?usp=sharing
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0BwAnA2KvhduSdUZUVnYtLWhkZjg/edit?usp=sharing

-Timo-

can't see the images
you need the direct link and then post it like this
<@img src="image link"> without the @ and "image link" is the image link if you didnt understand

tahakitan

k i just made it into links that are viewable to anyone. the image link was not showing for me either. I gave up lol

Fal01

@tahakitan,

It looks ok but I think you need to find a way to make the ninja stand out more against the background.

blue_elephant

Nice, the buttons look out of place to me though. They don't really fit with the chinese theme.

-Timo-

looks cool keep it up

tahakitan

@blue_elephant
yea, Im thinking of drawing an old looking parchment. I haven't done it yet though since I've been busy drawing everything else. I'm having a lot of fun making this game. Especially when I discover how to do something

@timolapre1998
thx

tahakitan

@Fal01
I might have to make him a white ninja so he stands out more. Thx for the advice!
Im also making selectable characters with different skills. All Asian theme but preferably Japanese theme.

blue_elephant

Maybe try an asian font too:

tahakitan

that's awesome! thx I'll have to look for that

Fal01

@tahakitan,

I think ninjas need to be dressed in black so I would make the background less fussy and lighter so he isn't competing with it.

By making some of the background elements less vivid you can give the illusion of distance from your foreground actors, or maybe blur them a bit.

blue_elephant

@Tahakitan There's some nice free fonts here: http://www.dafont.com/theme.php?cat=201

tahakitan

Brighting the background seems loke a good idea. The bamboo forest might be to dark

tahakitan

@blue_elephant
thanks alot! I appreciate it.

KevinCross

You could have a grey ninja. Mini Ninja is grey I believe.

Good luck with the game

tahakitan

@Fal01
@KevinCross

I actually just put the new lighter background on it. it looks 100x better than before I think. I dont think I'll have to change the ninjas color.

tahakitan

@Fal01

here is the new lighter background and objects

https://docs.google.com/file/d/0BwAnA2KvhduSWnZqWjhNdjM0cHM/edit?usp=sharing