My first video trailer. Feedback please.

eboy

Hello, here is a video trailer for my first app SPACE ADVENTURES.

Please let me know what you think.



http://itunes.apple.com/us/app/space-adventures/id315043153?mt=8

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Like TSB said...

Photics

I couldn't hear what she was saying at the beginning. The cheer cut her off.

I liked the screenshots of app more than the video. I don't think that the content is targeted for me, but it seems like a good video though.

The links listed on the related iTunes page don't work.

It seems like you're going in a good direction though... I haven't made a video for my iPhone / iPod Touch / iPad apps yet.

rdcube

kinda agree with photics, voice might need to be a little clearer...although lil girl voice is cute, sound fx overshadow the cuteness and at the end, it tends to run each other on words.

fix those minor details and it'll be a great video promo for ur phone...which I own and my daughters like.

what tools did u use to make all that?

RH

tshirtbooth said:
Dude thats amazing!!!!

Ditto

Although, I agree with Photics about the voice at the beginning, couldn't really hear what it said

eboy

Cool thanks. This was made in After effects. It will be great when we can import PNG sequences into GS...

StormyStudio

nice...

as above sort the audio a bit and it will be perfect.

I love After Effects, use it every day at work animating company logos and characters and what not. A very powerful bit of kit with loads of addons available. Revostock.com do loads of cool premade projects ranging from $10 to $100, Might be a good way of showing off our screen captures of games with minimum effort. some of the projects look like tv quality titles....some cool CSI style one.

Jaxter

After FX is great 10 from 10 from me

design219

I like the style, look forward to the game!

I also love After Effects. I also like Apples motion. I don't do a lot of video work, but the tools are so much better than they used to be.