Spiram 16 HD is now free!!!

jerlant360jerlant360 Member Posts: 82
edited March 2013 in Announce Your Game!
https://itunes.apple.com/app/spiram-16-hd/id608693248?mt=8

If you can , leave a review. :D


Thanks

Comments

  • SnapFireStudiosSnapFireStudios Member Posts: 1,603
    It looks nice ;)
    - Thomas
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  • SocksSocks London, UK.Member Posts: 12,822
    edited March 2013
    Looks nice, love the title screen, looks very 1983 !! :)

    There are a couple of grammar errors on your instructions page:


    DRAG THE MINES TO THE SAME COLOR SOUARE
    WHEN MINES START TO BLINK ARE NEAR TO EXPLOIT
    AVOID THE WHITE MINES
    RAINBOW MINES FITS WITH ALL COLORS
    LISTEN TO YOUR MUSIC WHILE PLAYING
    DONT MIX THE COLORS

    This should read:

    DRAG THE MINES TO THE SAME COLOR SQUARE
    WHEN MINES START TO BLINK THEY ARE NEAR TO EXPLODING
    (or more correctly: WHEN MINES START TO BLINK THEY ARE ABOUT TO EXPLODE)
    AVOID THE WHITE MINES
    RAINBOW MINES FIT WITH ALL COLORS
    (or more correctly: RAINBOW MINES MATCH ANY COLOR)
    LISTEN TO YOUR MUSIC WHILE PLAYING
    DON'T MIX THE COLORS
  • jerlant360jerlant360 Member Posts: 82
    edited March 2013
    @Socks

    oops!

    I will update it ASAP , im self-taught and english is my third language , i think i am very new in this hahaha.

    I can't use apostrophes and there's already a "Q". ( that's because the font ) :P


    Thanks a lot.


    P.S. If you ever need help in spanish or french , just let me know.


  • SocksSocks London, UK.Member Posts: 12,822
    I will update it ASAP , im self-taught and english is my third language , i think i am very new in this hahaha.
    :)

    I only know the one language ! I find it impressive that people can speak even two languages, let alone three, it must get confusing !
  • jerlant360jerlant360 Member Posts: 82
    It looks nice ;)
    - Thomas
    Thanks man!
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