Game to help a friend

RiffelRiffel Member Posts: 1,272
Hi friends,
I have submitted Bugardeen to appstore for review.
The game is FREE and All the revenue from iAds goes to my friend Mauro.
He acquired multiple sclerosis and needs U.S. $ 4,000.00 to buy a electric wheelchair.
I need your help to made description text in various languages.

My friend loves nature so did the game with that theme.

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The objective is to move the ladybug collecting flowers before times runout, every time you collect all flowers new flowers spawn and time is add.

Thank you,
Marcos Riffel

Comments

  • jamie_cjamie_c ImagineLabs.rocks Member, PRO Posts: 5,772
    Very nice of you to create this to help your friend. You should definitely post on Facebook, Tweet, try to start some kind of campaign so people know why this game was created and will go play it. Submit to review sites as well, leading off the request with exactly why you created the game.

    Let us know when it is released.
  • mrpacogpmrpacogp Member Posts: 400
    I can help translating to spanish and can try to call a friend and do it japanese.
  • UtopianGamesUtopianGames Member Posts: 5,692
    This is a wonderful idea and very kind of you.

    My uncle had a car accident when he was 19 which left him paralysed from the chest down and he had an electric wheelchair, we were more like brothers tbh and did loads together, miss him greatly as he passed away a few years ago but boy oh boy do I have some fond memories and lol sometimes at what we used to get up to.

    Darren.
  • tatiangtatiang Member, Sous Chef, PRO, Senior Sous-Chef Posts: 11,949
    I'm guessing you've already written the English descriptions, but if you'd like any help with that I offer proofreading services and would help out at no charge to you.

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  • ChakkuChakku Member Posts: 1,513

    The game is FREE and All the revenue from iAds goes to my friend Mauro.
    He acquired multiple sclerosis and needs U.S. $ 4,000.00 to buy a electric wheelchair.
    @Riffel

    Hmmm...I feel a sudden urge to download your game and repeatedly click the ads for a few hours ;)

    Chakku
  • RiffelRiffel Member Posts: 1,272
    You are all great people!
    @tatiang I have made a fast and poor description, sure I will replace it with yours!
    @jamie_c I have posted in my FB page hope people share it!
    @mrpacogp nice! thank you!
    @DeepBlueApps.com thank you for your support Darren!
    @Chakku thank you, but I think its is a cheat! :-)

    I need help to write an amazing & creative description in english! ;-)

    Thank you
  • tatiangtatiang Member, Sous Chef, PRO, Senior Sous-Chef Posts: 11,949
    Well I haven't played the game yet :) but something like this:

    Move the ladybug to collect beautiful flowers before your time runs out. Each flower you collect helps grow new flowers and extends your time. Can you collect them all?

    All advertising proceeds go to help a friend with multiple sclerosis. Thank you for your support!


    *I think you should mention that the profits go to help a friend in need.

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  • RiffelRiffel Member Posts: 1,272
    Great! @tatiang
    I think the mention is good, but users care about it?
  • tatiangtatiang Member, Sous Chef, PRO, Senior Sous-Chef Posts: 11,949
    edited February 2013
    I think the mention is good, but users care about it?
    Some people won't care. Some people will think it's a scam. Some people like @Chakku will download it and play it more often. So it's up to you but I think it's important to mention it because it's something you care about and it might improve your downloads.

    Also, if you have another location for information about this project (a blog, a kickstarter page, a support website) you could include that so that people can find out more.

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  • GraphicWarehouseGraphicWarehouse Member Posts: 927
    Great cause but I have to say that using buttons with no art makes makes it look very unprofessional.
  • GLGAMESGLGAMES SingaporeMember Posts: 988
    Do you need a chinese translation??
  • RiffelRiffel Member Posts: 1,272
    @GLGAMES all languages we can translate! thank you!

    here the description by Tatiang:

    Move the ladybug to collect beautiful flowers before your time runs out. Each flower you collect helps grow new flowers and extends your time. Can you collect them all?

    All advertising proceeds go to help a friend with multiple sclerosis. Thank you for your support!
  • RiffelRiffel Member Posts: 1,272
    Please post here other languages translations.

    English by Tatiang
    Move the ladybug to collect beautiful flowers before your time runs out. Each flower you collect helps grow new flowers and extends your time. Can you collect them all?

    All advertising proceeds go to help a friend with multiple sclerosis. Thank you for your support!
  • PaxPaxPaxPax Member Posts: 106
    If you are struggling with getting more translations and are not overly concerned with 'perfect' grammar, try using google translate. There will be some languages that will not translate perfectly but the 'point' will get across and HOPEFULLY not be offensive.
  • IsabelleKIsabelleK Member, Sous Chef Posts: 2,807
    Polish by me :)
    Poruszaj biedronką i zbierz piękne kwiatki, zanim upłynie czas. Na miejsce zebranego kwiatka wyrasta nowy i wydłuża czas. Czy dasz radę zebrać je wszystkie?

    Wszystkie dochody z reklam zostaną przekazane przyjacielowi ze stwardnieniem rozsianym. Dziękujemy za Twoją pomoc!
  • MeaningfulGamesMeaningfulGames Member, PRO Posts: 171
    I wish you the very best. :)
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