Here is some stuff I did today. I have a idea for a side and top view platform game. And this is where my brain is going to far. Again Im not a professional artist. I got alot of work to do.
@finnbog Sure the artwork isn't award winning, but I think its decent. It's technically sound and the style is consistent. I'm not a pro illustrator either and my game shaping up to look similar in quality, and I'm okay with it.
I think when people run into trouble is when there stuff is incosistent, some things are poorly drawn, others are photgraphed textures, and they have a few elements that look really nice which they obviously bought off the market place. And times new roman font.
I'll start with what socks would have said if he were brutally honest. It looks like a third grade art project put into illustrator, no shade no personality just flat shapes with the ocasional gradient. Im sorry but if I saw your game in the app store I would scroll right past your app. Basil Murad works pretty cheap if you want an artist.
I am learning. I am watching as many video tutorials I can. Shading with gradients or shading with objects is something I'm still try into get a feel for.
These are rough drafts after all.
I'm happy for any criticism. I soak it in. But I won't be a pro over night.
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I think when people run into trouble is when there stuff is incosistent, some things are poorly drawn, others are photgraphed textures, and they have a few elements that look really nice which they obviously bought off the market place. And times new roman font.
This looks clean and tidy, best of luck!
Seems I have got myself a reputation ! 8-X
What kind of critique would you like ? You have a choice of three in descending order of honesty.
1) Brutally Honest.
2) Constructive criticism.
3) Supportive / encouraging.
MjM. Does he have a Skype name?
These are rough drafts after all.
I'm happy for any criticism. I soak it in. But I won't be a pro over night.