What do you think of this background?

PBEmpirePBEmpire Member Posts: 676
in Art, Graphics, Music and Sound
Any ideas on how to improve it?
http://s1337.photobucket.com/albums/o662/gsrocksz/?action=view&current=beautybg.png

Comments

  • creativeappscreativeapps Member Posts: 1,770
    First find the objective of making this background understand the requirement. If this is for game background then not going to work. It looks clutter. Overall good attempt

  • MeaningfulGamesMeaningfulGames Member, PRO Posts: 171
    It looks very nice, but not game art material. Abstract patterns and colours don't work too well. I wouldn't mind it being a desktop wallpaper or something like that though.
  • gyroscopegyroscope I am here.Member, Sous Chef, PRO Posts: 6,598
    edited October 2012

    Relevant comments from @creativeapps + @Vincam I think.... it could be made to work for a game menu background, I'm also thinking.... but only if it's relevant to the game, i.e something to do with leaves, autumn or the garden maybe....

    Some suggestions to change it if you did want to use it for a menu card bg (Just a few ideas you might want to consider):

    The purple leaves clash with the other colours, I'd flip the orange leaved plant on the left as an exact mirror image, without any distortion or change to position, to replace the purple leaved distorted version.

    I'd delete the beige irregular shape in the back on the left

    I'd get rid of the black spots at the bottom, left and right; or make them very light grey

    I'd delete the middle up to about two thirds up, leaving white space for title and buttons perhaps.

    Anyhow, just my opinions; you or other members might think differently...

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