Translations exchange!
nepicochise
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AppStore is a global market, but to increase chances to sell our apps in many countries we have to provide correct descriptions and some press communication in appropriate language. I tried to write it by myself in english, but i'm not sure it's correct. Can someone check my texts if i post them here on gamesalad forum? In exchange, i can translate english texts in italian and spanish language, and suggest the best italian internet sites to post your commercial text. Thanks!
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1) AppStore description:
"Do you want to note your expenses, but think it's too much boring? iPiggy it's the perfect solution! iPiggy allow you to track your expenses in a easy, funny, iPhonny way! Just tap on coins and banknotes to select the desidered amount, and on the pink piggy pig to add it to the total. Now with US DOLLARS and BRITISH POUNDS support!"
2) Press communication:
"It's unbelievable how small expenses that seem insignificant, after a while start to weigh on our family budget. If we take note of all costs, even smaller ones, can realize it. But it would be a really boring task!
Now an application for iPhone and iPod Touch promises to make it enjoyable and entertaining, and its name is iPiggy. iPiggy is available on the App Store to 99 cents.
iPiggy is a tool to keep track of your expenses. Nothing new, one might say, but it is not entirely true: iPiggy has something that makes it different from other similar utilities: no keyboard, no numbers to type, no aseptic menues.
iPiggy offers simple interface, all by touching icons on the screen of the iPhone. To manage the entire program, simply touch the image of a category, a coin or note, or the pig piggy bank that lends its name to the application. Of course, those seeking a more technical tool, maybe able to process graphics, trends, export data in various formats, will target the most complete. iPiggy remains a half between profit and pleasure, which has the merit of making less boring to noting expenses."
I've had a go for you. Hope it is helpful. Let me know if there is anything else you need...
AppStore description:
"Do you really want to keep track of your expenses but think that sounds just too boring? Then iPiggy is the perfect solution! iPiggy allow you to track your expenses in a easy and fun way that makes great use of the features of the iPhone & iPod Touch. With this little app all you have to do is tap on coins and banknotes to select the desired amount and then drop them onto the pink pig to add it to the total. Currently iPiggy supports US DOLLARS and BRITISH POUNDS sterling currencies!"
2) Press communication:
"It's unbelievable how small expenses that may seem insignificant, can, after a while, start to really weigh on your family budget. If you do take note of all costs, including even the small ones, you will start to see this for yourself, but boy, that would be really boring! However, now there is an application for the iPhone and iPod Touch that promises to make it enjoyable and entertaining, and its name is iPiggy. What’s more iPiggy won’t break the bank and is available on the App Store for just 99 cents!
iPiggy’s a tool to keep track of your expenses. Nothing new, you might say, but that’s not entirely true, iPiggy has something that makes it stand out from the competition; no keyboard, no numbers to type and no dull menus!
iPiggy offers a simple interface, everything is controlled by just touching very easy to understand and clear on-screen icons. Simply touch the image of a coin, category, note or the piggy bank itself and you’ll have your expenses in order in no time. So, if you want to keep track of your expenses but don’t want to fall asleep doing so then iPiggy is for you."
AppStore description:
"Do you want to keep track of your expenses but think that sounds just a little too boring? Then iPiggy is the perfect solution for you! iPiggy allows you to track your own expenses in an easy and fun way that makes great use of the features available on the iPhone & iPod Touch. With this little app, all you have to do is tap on coins and/or banknotes to select the desired amount of money and then drop them onto the pink pig to add it to your running total. Currently iPiggy supports US DOLLARS and BRITISH POUNDS sterling currencies!"
2) Press communication:
"It's unbelievable how small expenses that may seem insignificant start to really weigh on your family budget after a while. If you take note of all your purchases, including even the small ones, you will start to see this for yourself. But that would be really boring...right?
A new application just released for the iPhone and iPod Touch promises to make it enjoyable and entertaining. Its name is iPiggy and its purchase price won’t break the bank. It is available right now on the App Store for just 99 cents!
iPiggy is a great tool to keep track of all your expenses. Nothing new, you might say, but that’s not entirely true, iPiggy has something that makes it stand out from the rest; no keyboard, no numbers to type in and no dull and boring menus!
iPiggy offers a simple and fun visual interface and everything is controlled by just touching the screen. It is very easy to use and a lot of fun too! Simply touch an image of a coin, category, banknote or the piggy bank itself and you will have your expenses in order in no time at all. So, if you want to keep track of your expenses but want to have a little fun while you're at it, then iPiggy is perfect for you."
"It is available right now on the App Store right now for just 99 cents!"
You wrote "right now" two times in one sentence :-)
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