Help with app-store description?

okpcokpc Member Posts: 53
hi all, i have already finish a new game "Match up fever", and i have to do it promotion.
but my English is bad. may i ask for anyone who can help me to improve this article. which will use for the app-store description.
(or please give suggestion if your have some idea with this article is missing) thanks you.


(-Description:
Enjoy the traditional and distinctive card matching game. Collect lucky star to level up the Card-Buddy!

-Features:
Beautiful and different styles of card design.
Constitute traditional or distinctive game under different gameplay seting.
Cumulative growth of Card-Buddy.
Share your highest scores with everyone, and gain cool achievements in the Game Center.

-How to Play:
Click the 2 same card to make it pair. Paired all card to clean the stage.
Each successful match, player can earn different number of lucky star.)

Best Answer

  • gyroscopegyroscope I am here.Posts: 6,598
    Accepted Answer

    Hi @okpc

    I've amended your description for you:

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    Description:
    Enjoy this traditional and distinctive card matching game. Collect lucky stars to open new levels in Card-Buddy!

    Features:
    • Beautiful card designs to choose from
    • Traditional or modern games easily chosen with the gameplay settings
    • Cumulative growth of Card-Buddy
    • Share your highest scores with everyone, and gain cool achievements in the Game Center

    How to Play:
    Click two identical cards to make a pair. Pair all the cards to clear the level.
    With each successful level, you can earn a different number of lucky stars.

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    I've haven't amended the line: "• Cumulative growth of Card-Buddy" as I don't understand what you mean.

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Answers

  • okpcokpc Member Posts: 53
    Hi gyroscope, thanks you. you have gave a great help to me!
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