heres my first game tell me what you think so far...

TailGames

im new to gamesalad, well kinda, i made an account a few months ago but never actually spent
time on making games due to work and school but then i decided to really give a go at this and
im having so much fun doing this and also i would like you to view my game and tell me what
you think.

but remember this is my first and im going to expand on this and hopefully if i get good tips
on the graphics, i will make it look more beautiful.

anyway follow the link below

poorcollegedev

Looks good for your first game. Send like it could be addictive too. the only thing that bugs new is the background. Its very...plain. Maybe add some variation in the grass and clouds in the sky

jckmcgraw

@TailGames

That TWANG is from GarageBand and I am using that for death in my app too!!! :O

Here are some specific suggestions:
-The art is really bland. People now-a-days expect great art, and that just doesn't cut it
-In the menu you have it changing scenes for it, but that requires a loading wheel (on an actual device). Here is a demo for changing scenes in 1 scene http://dl.dropbox.com/u/16233669/cam demo.gameproj.zip
-I have seen this idea for a game a billion times...

It is your first game, and I wouldn't count on 10,000 downloads. I'm sure you have learned so much from making it though.

Good luck,
Jack McGraw

jckmcgraw

@tailgames

Have you seen SpriteAttack's art tutorials? They are awesome!

Jack McGraw

TailGames

@jckmcgraw

well its still in early development and i could really use tips on making better artwork. and thankyou guys for the honest review i need them so i can fix the mistakes.

TailGames

@poorcollegedev

yeah i was actually trying to add moving clouds in the background but im still having problems with that but i will figure it out and the grass variations is a good suggestion i need to just learn to draw stuff because i made all this in sumopaint

TailGames

@jckmcgraw

yeah this morning i found them shortly after reading the comments