What do you think of my LOGO?

CulturePlay

I just completed this online tutorial using Adobe Illustrator and I was able to make this logo for my business. Let me know what you think:



Thanks!
CulturePlay

mynameisace

Not that I know huge amounts about art/design - It's something I'm actively trying to improve on at the moment, purchased a tonne of books and drawing by hand and digitally every day.

I, personally would go about designing your own logo by hand first. Just get a load of pieces of paper and a pencil and just keep sketching. Look at other app developer's logos to try and get a feel for what you're going for.

If you're more set on using the Illustrator tutorial route, that's cool and I Googled a few for you to maybe take a look at:

Change this one to a C and maybe change the colouring
I like the use of colour and the font is this one, just maybe alter it a little to make it more personal
This is very App friendly as a Splash screen/site logo/etc
Obviously change the lemon. Maybe to a building block, a lego block, something like that?

As for the one you did, it's not bad, just doesn't come and slap you in the face as an amazing logo (the blur on the original was way too high to add depth of field, just looked blurry).

Hope that helps somewhat.

Ace

stackpoole

Hi mate looks alright,
But I reckon the colours don't really match,
the "L" in Play is odd
the fonts don't match..

just odd but OK.

jckmcgraw

@Cultureplay

When I think of a logo, I think of super elegant, simple, and very little writing. Yours doesn't match my interpretation of a good logo. Just my opinion.

With that said, I do like the theme of your logo with the culture play and an attempt at some colors.

CulturePlay

@brendanzh926 I wanted to distinguish between the words culture and play that why created a difference between the two fonts. Perhaps it's too much of a difference. As for the colors...that's a work in progress, and definitely a weakness for me. The blur in the 'L' is supposed to give a bit of 3D distance, as if the L is further back...but I guess that's not working.

@jckmcgraw maybe logo is not the right term...perhaps it's more of a banner for my website.

Thanks for the feedback, I'll keep working!

jckmcgraw

@Cultureplay

The L is just too blurry for me. I also think the green background is too simple. If you want to keep it simple, you should add a bit more "spots" and sections to it.

patapple

Try to do to the letter "L" blue...it is only an advice

CulturePlay

@patapple I changed the L to blue...what do you think?
@jckmcgraw I removed the blur from the L

stackpoole

Hi mate,
I always learnt that when making logos and business stuff - always use font that is simple, easy to read..

Your "culture" is not a good font to use for business type matters, and just does not look good.. imo

UnicornInvasion

I love the most recent one!

jckmcgraw

The main focus is the writing... I think there should be a little more focus on an actual logo.

kinzua

Have a little definition to your logo. Right now it seems pretty hay wire.. U should work on something that looks stable, defined and accessible, however presented. Refine your thoughts.