Feedback on my attract screenshots please?

PixelPun

So I'm hoping to put out my first game this June and I thought I would work on some attract screenshots, they still need some work... I'm still not in love with all the wording and such... I just wanted to get some opinions and see if I'm on the right track with these things.






Thanks everyone for the help!
Rob

mynameisace

Looks gorgeous mate!

Ace

PixelPun

Thanks!

Ebreeze

Very nice indeed

stackpoole

Hiya
Looks really good!

PixelPun

thanks guys!

xforce

the screenshots look good but if you want to add a bit more polish to the gfx it would be better if theres a bit more detail on those boxes. a simple design, something.

PixelPun

Thanks guys!

@xforce I spent like three days trying to improve on those blocks, I made them look like cloth with different patterns, I tried a watercolor style. At the end of the day I just decided to leave them simple because it is a simple game. I did though at that time go into the backgrounds of the levels and make them pop more. But I do agree... more could be done with the blocks... I just kinda want get this thing out there and start on something new!

beefy_clyro

Looks nice ... gameplay video please

PixelPun

Thanks! Yeah Im going to start working on a video in a couple of weeks... I will post it up here when I'm done.