DO you think its good or no ???

salah.rahal

hey guys i was working or my main menu and this was i made i a m making a game like dark nebula
here it is

do you think its good or no ???
and any suggestions i realy need some help

EDIT: I fixed your image link [mynameisace]

salah.rahal

and i was think of making the space moving

RP

Totally Sci-fi. You could use a wrap x,y and/or a particle emitter for star dust or astroids.

LeonardDeveloper

I'ts alright... It could have some minor improvements..

Ren_Elljay

I'ts alright... It could have some minor improvements..

Such as?

Zoyt

Good start... Needs a little action along with the moving space.

MoonMouse

I think you're on the right track as far as theming is concerned

However, like @LeonardDeveloper said, there could be some minor improvements.
It's a great idea to have the background moving, and, like @RP mentioned, I think it would be cool if you added space dust and asteroids. Maybe even have a distant sun or planet I would, however, give the background a little more contrast, giving it a bit of gradient to enhance the effect. Maybe even try and see what it looks like with a blue hue rather than purple.

Apart from that, the title probably needs to be spiced up a bit - make it exciting and memorable. If you take a look at the Dark Nebula title, you'll see it has a coolness about it, a sense of epicness that draws people in. Even the name of "Dark Nebula" itself is attractive - it implies a mysterious science-fictiony element that gives a professional aspect all in itself.



I'd try rename "Ball Adventure" as something that gives off more of a sleek, science-fiction vibe.

Lastly, and this is just a little thing, you may want to change the "option" bit to "options" - which is far more common in menus. It all comes down to details

Anyway, hope this has helped in someway.
All the best with your game!

MM

The_Gamesalad_Guru

My opinion when you ask "is this good?" you yourself know it's not. Listen to your instincts and work it until you yourself know it's good. @moonmouse very nice rendering!

MoonMouse

Hahah thanks @FlyingBaconStudios! But I think you mean 'very nice Googling' :P
Didn't make the image, just found it on good ol' google images as an example because @sahal.rahal mentioned he wanted to make a game like Dark Nebula

Teehee!

I agree though, if you gotta ask whether something is good or not, you already know the answer.

beefy_clyro

I think you're on the right track as far as theming is concerned

However, like @LeonardDeveloper said, there could be some minor improvements.
It's a great idea to have the background moving, and, like @RP mentioned, I think it would be cool if you added space dust and asteroids. Maybe even have a distant sun or planet I would, however, give the background a little more contrast, giving it a bit of gradient to enhance the effect. Maybe even try and see what it looks like with a blue hue rather than purple.

Apart from that, the title probably needs to be spiced up a bit - make it exciting and memorable. If you take a look at the Dark Nebula title, you'll see it has a coolness about it, a sense of epicness that draws people in. Even the name of "Dark Nebula" itself is attractive - it implies a mysterious science-fictiony element that gives a professional aspect all in itself.



I'd try rename "Ball Adventure" as something that gives off more of a sleek, science-fiction vibe.

Lastly, and this is just a little thing, you may want to change the "option" bit to "options" - which is far more common in menus. It all comes down to details

Anyway, hope this has helped in someway.
All the best with your game!

MM

Very well put and some good advice in here

salah.rahal

TKX GUYS

LeonardDeveloper

Very good @moonmouse