looking for character feedback

Moebius

hey so here is a quick sneak peak for what my main character of my platformer game will be, what do you think about it, which color do you imagine it, maybe another expression? give your thought right here all recommeendation will be greatly appreciated!

alimpo83

It's way similar to Super Meat Boy, maybe you should twist it a bit!

poorcollegedev

At first glance, it looks like the character from Super Meat Boy

Moebius

Maybe because of the shape, I want a simple yet versatile shape, for a cute, yet cool character,it's true indeed that it needs some changes

tatiang

Marshmallow Man.

SpriteAttack

It's so generic that his has been done 100s of times before... and it can still work well... if done right. It's hard to saw much based on the pencil sketch. My advice would be to take it into vectors - based on simple squares and circles for the eyes, play with the stroke width and different fills and change the expressions by moving the eyes and altering the mouth shape.

Here's my take on the box shaped character design:

Tysuru

It's so generic that his has been done 100s of times before... and it can still work well... if done right. It's hard to saw much based on the pencil sketch. My advice would be to take it into vectors - based on simple squares and circles for the eyes, play with the stroke width and different fills and change the expressions by moving the eyes and altering the mouth shape.

Here's my take on the box shaped character design:

What a pro Spriteattack, haha.