***TOPS Street Game Ready for Download on iTunes***

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Hey GameSalad Family!

My App TOPS is ready for download: http://itunes.apple.com/us/app/tops/id503252761?mt=8
My students and I would greatly appreciate the feedback for improvement.

Thanks in Advance!

Marlbert

FallacyStudios

@marlbert

Congrats

CulturePlay

Thanks!

RThurman

Roberto -- This has real potential as an educational game. I assume the instructional objective is to let children practice simple addition -- with the game play acting as a motivator? Your student/developers are on the right track!

First, I would recommend using more of the screen space for game play. The numbered square targets are relatively small to hit. Using more of the screen would allow for larger targets. (The manhole cover / title actually adds little to the game play but takes up lots of screen real estate.)

Second, it can be pretty frustrating for the "top" to be 90% inside the box, but still not count as a hit. (Just because its barely outside the line.) In an instructional game, the game play shouldn't interfere (too much) with the instructional objective.

Third, the "top" seems to glide way too much. I'd suggest more drag.

Overall, a great start on an educational/instructional game!

Hope this helps
RThurman

CulturePlay

RThurman -- Thank you for taking the time to review and provide valuable feedback on our game. We appreciate the words of encouragement, and will work on making these improvements.

Roberto