My First game..please give feedback

mlaftamlafta Member Posts: 147
edited November -1 in Announce Your Game!
Hello guys,

This is my first game, I did it from scratch not from a template. It will be submitted tomorrow.

This is a short video



I know the quality of the video is not great, I used quicktime to capture the screen, any idea how can I record a clearer video?

THanks in advance

Comments

  • taidocattaidocat Member Posts: 2
    You could use Camtasia 7...
  • taidocattaidocat Member Posts: 2
    You could use Camtasia 7...
  • mlaftamlafta Member Posts: 147
    Thanks..what do you think of the game?
  • BackUpAndDownBackUpAndDown Member Posts: 685
    it looks pretty good for a first game. I'm not sure what the other levels look like but if you haven't already you should add some more obstacles.
  • mlaftamlafta Member Posts: 147
    BackUpAndDown said:
    it looks pretty good for a first game. I'm not sure what the other levels look like but if you haven't already you should add some more obstacles.

    Thanks

    it actually has 30 challenging levels

    check this new video

  • BackUpAndDownBackUpAndDown Member Posts: 685
    Looks a little glitchy.
  • mlaftamlafta Member Posts: 147
    it's the simulator. It works fine on the iphone.
  • POMPOM Member Posts: 2,599
    i think that for the first game its very nice.

    a suggestion would be to make a flour and let the ball bounce on it instead of falling down the screen,
    so it feels more like a basketball.

    Roy.
  • mlaftamlafta Member Posts: 147
    I have submitted the game to the app store. I will prepare an update with your suggestion, that's if this game approved :)

    Thanks POM
  • JeffreyShimaneJeffreyShimane Member Posts: 372
    It's a good start. Some suggestions:

    1) The ball looks more like a beach ball than a basketball.

    2) The ball doesn't rotate when shot. It'd probably look more realistic if there was some backspin rotation on the ball (although this would probably necessitate changing the ball graphic so that it was a perfect side-view of a basketball).

    3) When the ball goes through the net, it should make a swishing sound and when the ball banks off a wall, it should make the sound of a basketball bouncing.

    Right now, the basketball theme is pretty weakly used.

    - Jeff
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