• Claire Moorcroft and the Lost Castle

FanStudioUKFanStudioUK Member Posts: 459
edited November -1 in Announce Your Game!
We started the work on our new point and click adventure: Claire Moorcroft and the Lost Castle

We'd like to have your feedback based on our intro image:

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*Click on photo for full size view.

Thank you!
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  • danlbryantdanlbryant Member Posts: 236
    The graphics look great, I do love my point and click games.
  • FanStudioUKFanStudioUK Member Posts: 459
    Thank you!
  • TJMNUTTJMNUT Member Posts: 236
    that's awesome!
  • FanStudioUKFanStudioUK Member Posts: 459
    Glad you like it :) we will post more screenshot soon...
  • jb15jb15 Member Posts: 602
    Wow wow wow wow wow! Seeing that just makes me want to delve in! Great artwork!
  • guillefaceguilleface Member Posts: 1,014
    really fantastic,hopefully one day i will make a point and click game, this are my favorites have player more than 500 online lol, and will buy it for sure, hopefully is out soon
  • FanStudioUKFanStudioUK Member Posts: 459
    Thank you guys, we are very excited as well.

    The game will be launched in August.
  • scribblstudiosscribblstudios Member Posts: 118
    How long did it take you to make that screen, it looks amazing!
  • RHRH Member Posts: 1,079
    Yeh, lovely image. Although I did read it as Claire and the Moorcroft Lost Castle
  • FanStudioUKFanStudioUK Member Posts: 459
    @scribblstudios this first scene was completed within 10 hours of work

    @RH thank you for your feedback, I will ask the others to tell me how they read the title :)
  • FanStudioUKFanStudioUK Member Posts: 459
    Other screenshot from a scene where you find the crash site...
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    *Click on photo for full size view.
  • FanStudioUKFanStudioUK Member Posts: 459
    What do you think? :D
  • briscoeleebriscoelee Member Posts: 42
    Looks good, but...

    The title scene:
    - I like the C and M connected but I also read it Claire and the Moorcroft Lost Castle
    - the font, color, and treatment looks great!
    - The plane's wings appear to be transparent in some places

    The landing scene (very nit-picky):
    - the plane is split in half yet there are fresh green plants growing out of the middle?
    - there is no crash damage to the trees or surrounding area
    - the plane has crashed yet is still nice and shiny - free of any visible damage (maybe a broken window would help)
    - the wing at the bottom loses it's hard edge and "fades into the background"
    - the column of smoke (though nice) seams out of place
    - I really like the satchel!
  • kolabokolabo Member Posts: 240
    Love the artwork. Feel like clicking on Play :)

    Also read the title Claire and the Moorecroft Lost Castle.
  • LuckyLurcherLuckyLurcher Member Posts: 343
    briscoelee said:
    Looks good, but...

    The title scene:
    - I like the C and M connected but I also read it Claire and the Moorcroft Lost Castle
    - the font, color, and treatment looks great!
    - The plane's wings appear to be transparent in some places

    The landing scene (very nit-picky):
    - the plane is split in half yet there are fresh green plants growing out of the middle?
    - there is no crash damage to the trees or surrounding area
    - the plane has crashed yet is still nice and shiny - free of any visible damage (maybe a broken window would help)
    - the wing at the bottom loses it's hard edge and "fades into the background"
    - the column of smoke (though nice) seams out of place
    - I really like the satchel!

    +1

    FanStudioUK, Your artwork does need some work, but on a very positive note, you are getting the atmosphere of the game spot on. I'm guessing it's a mystery style game set in the 1930s? I'm very much looking forward to playing it.
  • FanStudioUKFanStudioUK Member Posts: 459
    @briscoelee thank you for your feedback, I really appreciate the time you took to analyze the images! you are right, I still have to work on these images. Sometimes is very hard to achieve these effects when you are using only stock photography... The thing is that I want everything to be perfect so I will give attention to the detail as much as possible.

    Regarding the logo this is the best way I could combine the words without having a "loose" logo... that's why C & M are connected so they can be read together. The thing is that you will first read the title and afterwards you will see the logo so I think there won't be any confusion...

    Yes, the game will start in 1957 and afterwards the story will move to 1987... :)

    Thanks again guys, your feedback helps a lot!
  • FanStudioUKFanStudioUK Member Posts: 459
    Sneak peak :)
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  • DreamLabDreamLab Member Posts: 2,127
    Hey how is the game coming? Is it still coming out in August?
  • firemaplegamesfiremaplegames Member Posts: 3,211
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  • firemaplegamesfiremaplegames Member Posts: 3,211
    yes, excited to see this one!
  • GamersRejoiceGamersRejoice Member Posts: 817
    Looking like a good start but I can I say one thing? C'mon people lets get more creative the with the tote bags!

    Does everyone carry around a leather bag like that or what? :)
  • IsabelleKIsabelleK Member, Sous Chef Posts: 2,807
    GamersRejoice said:
    Looking like a good start but I can I say one thing? C'mon people lets get more creative the with the tote bags!

    Does everyone carry around a leather bag like that or what? :)

    No, Joe carries a bag like that in Grisly Manor, so now everyone wants the same bag :P
  • FanStudioUKFanStudioUK Member Posts: 459
    Lol, people are used with these bags so it's easier for them when they see one :)

    We are still working (hard) and we will probably release it in mid September.

    We don't want to rush things, we're aiming to release a quality game which everyone will enjoy for sure!

    Show your support, like us here

    Thank you!
  • DreamLabDreamLab Member Posts: 2,127
    GamersRejoice said:

    Does everyone carry around a leather bag like that or what? :)

    It must be a fashion thing ;)
  • GamersRejoiceGamersRejoice Member Posts: 817
    FanStudioUK said:
    Lol, people are used with these bags so it's easier for them when they see one :)

    I don't really think this is true. People are used to seeing a bag or something that holds their items. Not necessarily a brown leather tote bag. Just think about this for a minute. You're in a plane over the jungle and you're probably going to carry a backpack, I guess it depends on your preference.

    All I'm trying to say is make sure the type of bag makes sense for your game, not just what people are used to. Keep up the good work.
  • mithraweptmithrawept Member, PRO Posts: 167
    Looks great!
  • butterbeanbutterbean Member Posts: 4,315
    DreamLab said:
    It must be a fashion thing ;)

    It's called a "Murse" (aka: man purse)

    Personally I think you should go all out, and get a Gucci bag instead ;) I don't think Claire would be caught dead with a briefcase like that...

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    Or... maybe she's more of a Prada girl?

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  • IsabelleKIsabelleK Member, Sous Chef Posts: 2,807
    I suggest Louis Vuitton :P
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