Music track opinion?

SkyMapleSkyMaple Member Posts: 817
edited November -1 in Art, Graphics, Music and Sound
I've been working on this song for a little while and would like to know what you guys think! :D

http://snd.sc/l7gVze

Comments

  • RedlerTechRedlerTech Member Posts: 1,583
    GENIUS ;)
  • SkyMapleSkyMaple Member Posts: 817
    rly? I thought it sux :P
  • RedlerTechRedlerTech Member Posts: 1,583
    Did you use garageband for that?
  • SkyMapleSkyMaple Member Posts: 817
    yeah
  • RedlerTechRedlerTech Member Posts: 1,583
    cool! When I bought my mac, garageband didn't work :/ even APL CARE couldn't help -.-
  • SkyMapleSkyMaple Member Posts: 817
    lol, apple....
  • FjantIncFjantInc Member Posts: 115
    To be honest I think it needs lots of work. It's repetative, rather boring and not well mixed. If I were to listen to it in a game over and over again I'd throw out the phone. Try with a longer melody and vary it more. Some harmonies that goes with the melody instead of that second "channel" that comes in.
  • SkyMapleSkyMaple Member Posts: 817
    Hey guys! Just made another, what do you think? Its a work in progress, I'm going to try to figure out how to change it up in some parts.



    (hopefully this ones a bit better) :P
  • DreamLabDreamLab Member Posts: 2,127
    Both of them sound cool. but yah the first one is a BIT repetitive. I think after so long you should go into like a new verse with a new beat and then dive back into the first beat. Just mix it up a bit.
  • JohnPapiomitisJohnPapiomitis Member Posts: 6,256
    SkyMaple said:
    Hey guys! Just made another, what do you think? Its a work in progress, I'm going to try to figure out how to change it up in some parts.



    (hopefully this ones a bit better) :P

    is this for a game or are you getting into making music,producing, ect?

    For critism if your just starting using garageband its not bad at all . But if you want a honest opinion its still to repetative. Switch some octaves up in the synth , vary a note or 2 in the drums every now in then. Have secondary synths and different basselines.
  • SkyMapleSkyMaple Member Posts: 817
    cool, thanks guys! I enjoy getting some constructive criticism that I can build off of. I'm going to look into how I can change it up. The song was just something I was messing around with. Probably not going directly into a game, it'll need some tweaking first.
  • LumpAppsLumpApps Member Posts: 2,881
    I'm into Rock, so I would turn this off.
    So you better put an off button or I will not play your game ;)

    Lump Apps and My Assets

  • SkyMapleSkyMaple Member Posts: 817
    Lol, its not quite ready for a game yet ;D
  • scribblstudiosscribblstudios Member Posts: 118
    It's pretty good, I guess.
    I would give it 3 out of 5 stars.
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