What do think of this pinball?

POMPOM Member Posts: 2,599
edited November -1 in Art, Graphics, Music and Sound
Hey all
so 2 more games is joining to The Loonimals Toy Box
One of them is a pinball game:
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I Just finished designing it ,
What do you think?

Roy.

Comments

  • DrGlickertDrGlickert Member Posts: 1,135
    I think it looks really good. What size image is it?

    If it's small (320x480) I'd recommend making it larger and putting a camera control on the ball. Just my 2-cents.

    Looks good though!
  • POMPOM Member Posts: 2,599
    DrGlickert said:
    I think it looks really good. What size image is it?

    If it's small (320x480) I'd recommend making it larger and putting a camera control on the ball. Just my 2-cents.

    Looks good though!

    Thanks guys ,
    The image (made of many actors) is a full screen of iPad , no scrolling needed..

    Any thing you might remove or add?

    Roy.
  • LumpAppsLumpApps Member Posts: 2,881
    The arched shapes can be rounder.
    Looks great. Perfectly fitting your Loonimals theme.

    How are sales going with the Loonimals? As expected?

    Lump Apps and My Assets

  • POMPOM Member Posts: 2,599
    LudwigHeijden said:
    The arched shapes can be rounder.
    Looks great. Perfectly fitting your Loonimals theme.

    How are sales going with the Loonimals? As expected?

    Ok ill try it out thanks!

    Sales are really bad , far away from my expectations , i can only hope to make it to N&N this weekend ;)

    Roy.
  • POMPOM Member Posts: 2,599
    uptimistik said:
    I would remove it from the Education section and place it under Games. Even though it is a Kiddies game it is still a game.

    That was a MISTAKE!
    It was suppose to be in category Games (kids , educational )
    And second category of educational .

    Ill reverse it in the update , it is possible right ?!

    Roy.
  • POMPOM Member Posts: 2,599
    Rounded things up a bit:
    Photobucket

    Do you think its better? (i do)

    Roy.
  • HoneyTribeStudiosHoneyTribeStudios Member Posts: 1,792
    Your art style is really nice and bright. The 2nd pinball table looks better with the smoother curves.
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  • ApplaudAppsApplaudApps Member Posts: 308
    Looks really good pom, but to keep with the animal theme you should have actual seals (or your walrus) with their flippers for the flippers!!
  • LumpAppsLumpApps Member Posts: 2,881
    Better! ;)

    Lump Apps and My Assets

  • YatelandYateland Member, PRO Posts: 81
    this art work is not good
  • YatelandYateland Member, PRO Posts: 81
    you can make it better
  • kapserkapser Member Posts: 458
    Really it doesn't sell? It is so polished and like 8 games in 1. Wonder if it would sell better if all those game were separate game, but for me this package sounds like an awesome deal for 99c. Probably need some visibility. Is there any games for kids that sell well?

    I'm not sure if I'd play that, but I'd buy it for my kids if only I had.
  • ValanValan Member, BASIC Posts: 410
    The background graphic looks fine but, IMO, the Skin colour and wood textures need changing to another graphic or the same texture.

    Have a look at real pinball tables. Notice the lighting varies enormously. Sometimes the background is quite dark until a bumper or lit graphic highlights a portion of it. Notice also how the screws look, their size and location.

    I know that you are not doing a simulation but incorporating a few simple effects would really show.

    Cheers
    Valan
  • POMPOM Member Posts: 2,599
    Good morning everyone!
    iv'e read your comments and they all helpful!
    especially this one:
    ifunway said:
    this art work is not good

    ;)

    ill start make some changes and upload so you tell me what you think.

    Roy.
  • EatingMyHatEatingMyHat Member Posts: 1,246
    Looks really great, can't wait for the update. If sales are bad, why not have it as a third loonimals game?
  • POMPOM Member Posts: 2,599
    EatingMyHat said:
    Looks really great, can't wait for the update. If sales are bad, why not have it as a third loonimals game?

    Lets see if ill make it to N&N this week and then ill consider this option , but i don't think this game alone is good enough by itself , there are many FREE pro pinballs out there , i don't think this one can compete with them.

    Roy.
  • POMPOM Member Posts: 2,599
    Ok guys i made some graphical changes , and also i uploaded a video so you can see the game in action
    its not finished yet but its very close to the final version :


    So now that you see the gameplay you can give me some more opinions .
    Thanks for helping me getting this far.

    Roy.
  • POMPOM Member Posts: 2,599
    Any opinions on the changes ?!

    Roy.
  • gyroscopegyroscope I am here.Member, Sous Chef, PRO Posts: 6,598
    Hi Roy; I for one think it's very good indeed; love the fresh colours/graphics + nice employment of pinball. Looks a professional offering. :-)

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  • POMPOM Member Posts: 2,599
    gyroscope said:
    Hi Roy; I for one think it's very good indeed; love the fresh colours/graphics + nice employment of pinball. Looks a professional offering. :-)

    Thanks mate :)
    I hope you had a great birthday !

    Roy.
  • AsymptoteellAsymptoteell Member Posts: 1,362
    It looks great! Very well polished, especially now that I can see it in motion. Are you going to add music?
  • HoneyTribeStudiosHoneyTribeStudios Member Posts: 1,792
    Hmm. Does it play a bit slow? Then again, it's aimed at kids?
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  • POMPOM Member Posts: 2,599
    asymptoteell said:
    It looks great! Very well polished, especially now that I can see it in motion. Are you going to add music?

    Sure! background music and more sound effects will be added .
    shaz said:
    Hmm. Does it play a bit slow? Then again, it's aimed at kids?

    I noticed that too , i raised the "max speed" and its much better now ;)
    Thanks for pointing this out.

    Roy,
  • TheGamerTheGamer Member Posts: 94
    Looks great, but judging by the graphics it's appealing to a 3-4 year old. Im not sure how many parents would let their kids play on their Iphone/Ipad or Ipod touch at that age. You also mentioned that your other app is not selling well, I think its the same issue.

    If I, as an adult consumer saw it on the AppStore, unfortunately I wouldn't buy any of them because it looks kiddie, and thus never even give it chance no matter how great they are.
  • ValanValan Member, BASIC Posts: 410
    Looks better although personally I'd lose the wood texture.
    Maybe add actors to the walrus bird and monkey to light up when they are hit. Use the Additive setting and put the alpha to 0 normally. Then when the animal bumpers are hit the actors alpha can change to 0.5.

    The bird behind the monkey needs to be moved as it looks a bit odd.

    Valan
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