Get more sales - More VS Less description

Eminem

Which would be better,

Writing more about ur app on the AppStore?
Or
Writing less

Iv seen a lot of people go in the top ten and have seen they only write 3 sentences

VoidedSky

People like Bullets, So I assume if you get straight to the point, and explain it all in bullet points, the description will be fine.

~CTM

quantumsheep

Personally, I like people to know as much as possible about my games, so that they can make an informed decision as to whether it's something they'd like to play!

Your game page is your shop window.

Make your text interesting, exciting and fun!

And make sure it's well written! Make a draft in Word or something similar and make sure there aren't any spelling mistakes. You wouldn't catch EA spelling 'Lose' as 'Loose' - be professional and check everything!

Then put some bullet points at the bottom for those that like them!

No research has gone into this post. It's just a personal opinion, so feel free to ignore it!

QS

ORBZ

In my opinion, the first three sentences are all I usually read. When I see a wall of text I zone out. There is a button in AppStore that takes me to the developer website. It's there that I expect to find a video (that will play on my iDevice) or two of ACTUAL GAMEPLAY. If I'm not interested from the video, the FULL SCREEN screenshots, and the first few sentences I'm probably not going to keep reading all the fine print.